Feeback For Mock Music Magazine

Front Page:

The font and colours of the mast head are good and work really well with the background of the magazine but the subheadings or small writing towards the bottom needs to be shorter and a different colour than white because its low visibility. The Sub heading 'Music Magazine' Doesn't look good or fit well in the top right corner and would be better if it wasn't there and instead move my title around a it more to see if i can create a better positioning for it. The picture of my featured artist works well with her simple look but her hair needs to be neater (straitened).

Contents Page:

The contents page needs to be redesigned altogether and i need to reposition all the text also, but the fonts and colours work well together, Might have to make a slight change to the white font so its more readable and visible. I also need to re-think the pictures i have taken and maybe use the featured artist on the contents page instead of a band and also reposition the photos and maybe over lap the text onto the photos.

Double Page Spread:

With the double i need to focus on my featured artist mor than the other two smaller articles that i have added on the side because there is no need for them to be there. I also need to remove the seperators from the magazine and think about connecting my picture that i have taken of my artist to the text more and giving the fonts and other text more of the artists style and creating a wider focus on the artist and the article. I also need to add a catchy subtitle under the name of my featured artist.