Feedback Update

Front Page:
After my feedback I have changed the colour and font of the smaller text on the front of the page allowing it to be more visible and stand out more, i have also changed the colour of the mast head to a block colour instead of the multicoloured masthead to give it more of a simple look. The image of the featured artist is still in the middle of the page but there is a more close up shot of her from the shoulders up with a small blank space at the top to fit the masthead and text that will overlap some of the image.

Contents Page:
On the contents page I have moved all the writing to the left of the page and given it the same fonts as the front page and similar colours so there is a consistency through the magazine. I have then placed the image of the featured artist to the right with some overlapping text so it's more noticeable and stands out more but still keeps the simplicity and creativity for the magazine.

Double Page Spread:
On the double page spread the image will still be on the left with a mid shot of the featured artist with her style added to the text surrounding her allowing the reader to see what type of person they are and  what their style is like. There will be a 3 paragraph about her to the right talking about what she has achieved in the last year and what she is hopping to happen now and in the next few years.

In The Next Week: I hope to achieve a new style for my magazine and create a suitable image for the featured artist allowing me to create a magazine that suits the genre of alternative music but also Make it look interesting. I also am planning to take some pictures of my featured artist in the next week so I can see if my choices with close and mid shots work with the magazine like I hoped they would.