I love the font you used for your masthead and the colour/pattern of it, as it's different and matches the alternative genre of your magazine. It also contrasts with the grey background which is consistent throughout the magazine and works really well. The style of the main model also looks really good and goes well with your genre, and her pose is simple which works well also. The double page spread layout shows that you have developed two other artists as well as a main one and shows variety which is good.
The text used is really good, very original and different from the majority of others fonts. The model has a good look, but a lot of lose hair - other than that there is nothing else i would change and I really like the overall image of the magazine.
The font and pattern used thoughout the magazine looks really interesting wghich would be attention grabbing to the reader. I really like the name and it sounds like a proper magazine name. I think that the contents page could look more interesting, the back ground colour is quite boring and its difficult to read the white writing- especially on the double page spread. I like the layout of the double page spread, however a different pose/facial expression on the model would loom better and make the project look more interesting. Overall, I like it
At first glance, I really like the style of your front cover. The image and the font used for the masthead are very striking and work well against the plain background, and the model looks great. To make this better, I think the colour of the text should be changed to stand out more, could be made bigger and also positioned differently. I also don't think that 'music magazine' needs to be included as this is a given. I think the contents page layout works well, although I think the models used for the band don't look right together and different poses should be considered. I also like the layout of the double page spread, but I think the model should also reflect a different image to make it look more interesting. This is a good first draft, though. :)
I think that the font that you've used for the masthead really suits the alternative genre of your magazine. I think that the model you've used looks good. I think that you could have used a more original, alternative name for the featured artist. I think maybe some of the fonts on the cover may be a bit too small and not very legible.
I love the font you used for your masthead and the colour/pattern of it, as it's different and matches the alternative genre of your magazine. It also contrasts with the grey background which is consistent throughout the magazine and works really well. The style of the main model also looks really good and goes well with your genre, and her pose is simple which works well also. The double page spread layout shows that you have developed two other artists as well as a main one and shows variety which is good.
ReplyDeleteThe text used is really good, very original and different from the majority of others fonts. The model has a good look, but a lot of lose hair - other than that there is nothing else i would change and I really like the overall image of the magazine.
ReplyDeleteThe font and pattern used thoughout the magazine looks really interesting wghich would be attention grabbing to the reader. I really like the name and it sounds like a proper magazine name. I think that the contents page could look more interesting, the back ground colour is quite boring and its difficult to read the white writing- especially on the double page spread. I like the layout of the double page spread, however a different pose/facial expression on the model would loom better and make the project look more interesting. Overall, I like it
ReplyDeleteAt first glance, I really like the style of your front cover. The image and the font used for the masthead are very striking and work well against the plain background, and the model looks great. To make this better, I think the colour of the text should be changed to stand out more, could be made bigger and also positioned differently. I also don't think that 'music magazine' needs to be included as this is a given. I think the contents page layout works well, although I think the models used for the band don't look right together and different poses should be considered. I also like the layout of the double page spread, but I think the model should also reflect a different image to make it look more interesting. This is a good first draft, though. :)
ReplyDeleteI think that the font that you've used for the masthead really suits the alternative genre of your magazine. I think that the model you've used looks good. I think that you could have used a more original, alternative name for the featured artist. I think maybe some of the fonts on the cover may be a bit too small and not very legible.
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